Monday, January 25, 2010

The Reminder

by
Jim Wisneski
Headstones balanced against a fresh sunset. The dark curves - upside down smiles - stare back. They’re calling. Stems ride from the dead ground. A faded picture - curls and sways - with no breeze. Can you hear ghosts whispering? Or the soul of the living. . . They huddle to the black gates. The bicycle on the ground. One wheel still spinning - click, click, click. Can you smell the cold air? Its fingers reach inside. Lighted steps hobble. Create an underground thunder. The roar of life - the celebration. With the round reminders. . . They’re waiting

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Freaky! chilling. Well done :)

Cynthia Schuerr said...

The first time I read your poem, Jim, I was interrupted by the phone and got totally sidetracked.
This morning, I read it all the way through.
My body is still shivering at the thought that...'They're waiting.
Very cryptic and chilling.
Great job!

Jim Bronyaur said...

Thanks Michelle and Cynthia for the comments here.

Jim