by Michelle Dennis Evans
Screaming tires Chugging engine Smell of oil Fumes engulf Flowing blood Broken bodies Hope shattered Death obvious Eternity near Faith overshadows
Michelle, A realm of sights, smells and sounds. And the beauty of a positive end. Loved it!
Powerful. Very much so. So much said in so few words. Well done.
Oh my Goddess. Don't want to be there or see it... But your powerful words so good- has shown it so wellGreat Michelle
Thank you for your comments - so appreciate them. :)
See, it's the simple lines that get to me for this one. They can mean so much to each person. I can see, smell, and taste on this one. . . great job! :)Jim
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Michelle, A realm of sights, smells and sounds. And the beauty of a positive end. Loved it!
Powerful. Very much so. So much said in so few words. Well done.
Oh my Goddess. Don't want to be there or see it... But your powerful words so good- has shown it so well
Great Michelle
Thank you for your comments - so appreciate them. :)
See, it's the simple lines that get to me for this one. They can mean so much to each person. I can see, smell, and taste on this one. . . great job! :)
Jim
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