Tuesday, January 12, 2010

Broken Bodies

by Michelle Dennis Evans

Screaming tires Chugging engine Smell of oil Fumes engulf Flowing blood Broken bodies Hope shattered Death obvious Eternity near Faith overshadows

5 comments:

Cynthia Schuerr said...

Michelle, A realm of sights, smells and sounds. And the beauty of a positive end. Loved it!

Tess said...

Powerful. Very much so. So much said in so few words. Well done.

Dulce said...

Oh my Goddess. Don't want to be there or see it... But your powerful words so good- has shown it so well
Great Michelle

Michelle said...

Thank you for your comments - so appreciate them. :)

Jim_Wisneski said...

See, it's the simple lines that get to me for this one. They can mean so much to each person. I can see, smell, and taste on this one. . . great job! :)

Jim