Tuesday, January 12, 2010

Broken Bodies

by Michelle Dennis Evans

Screaming tires Chugging engine Smell of oil Fumes engulf Flowing blood Broken bodies Hope shattered Death obvious Eternity near Faith overshadows

5 comments:

Cynthia Schuerr said...

Michelle, A realm of sights, smells and sounds. And the beauty of a positive end. Loved it!

Tess said...

Powerful. Very much so. So much said in so few words. Well done.

Dulçe ♥ said...

Oh my Goddess. Don't want to be there or see it... But your powerful words so good- has shown it so well
Great Michelle

Anonymous said...

Thank you for your comments - so appreciate them. :)

Jim Bronyaur said...

See, it's the simple lines that get to me for this one. They can mean so much to each person. I can see, smell, and taste on this one. . . great job! :)

Jim