Wednesday, April 21, 2010
I Want
by
Rebecca Besser
I want you to hold me,
but you never have the time.
I want you to see me,
but you don’t know I’m alive.
I want you to talk to me,
but you never say a word.
I want you to want me,
but your passion can’t be found.
I want you to love me,
but you never seem to care.
I want you here always,
even though you cause my despair.
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8 comments:
What a wonderful poem.
Just one small thing, I hope that's okay, but why did you use the comma and then #2?
>I want you to love me, 2<
Wonderful, emotional poem. Loved it.
Thank you for sharing.
No, the #2 is NOT supposed to be there. I meantioned it so hopefully it will get removed as some point. LOL
Thanks!
~becca
Great job, Rebecca. I love it. It's sad that some relationships are just like that. One wants much more than the other.
powerful - full of emotion
beautifully written :)
Meant what I said about it being wonderful. You did a great job.
Lovely and sad.
Karen :0)
Lovely and deeply sad. Love can be a difficult thing.
Thanks ~becca
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