Wednesday, April 21, 2010

I Want

by Rebecca Besser I want you to hold me, but you never have the time. I want you to see me, but you don’t know I’m alive. I want you to talk to me, but you never say a word. I want you to want me, but your passion can’t be found. I want you to love me, but you never seem to care. I want you here always, even though you cause my despair.


ganymeder said...

What a wonderful poem.

Just one small thing, I hope that's okay, but why did you use the comma and then #2?

>I want you to love me, 2<

Wonderful, emotional poem. Loved it.
Thank you for sharing.

R said...

No, the #2 is NOT supposed to be there. I meantioned it so hopefully it will get removed as some point. LOL



Cynthia Schuerr said...

Great job, Rebecca. I love it. It's sad that some relationships are just like that. One wants much more than the other.

Michelle said...

powerful - full of emotion
beautifully written :)

ganymeder said...

Meant what I said about it being wonderful. You did a great job.

Karen from Mentor said...

Lovely and sad.
Karen :0)

Maria A. Kelly said...

Lovely and deeply sad. Love can be a difficult thing.

Bec said...

Thanks ~becca