Friday, March 5, 2010
Grass is Green
by
Michelle Dennis Evans
Trees sway with wind
Sun is high
Clouds far away
Perfect days
A beautiful country
Time to enjoy
Outside to explore
Brain filled with pain
Can’t see clear
Filled with clouds
Blue skies distant
Searching for light
Hidden meaning near
Hint of a breeze
Maybe a beautiful day
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9 comments:
I love this poem! So many people deal with depression, and they can't enjoy the beautiful things in life. This poem reminds me of that and has a ray of light at the end.
Lovely poem, Michelle. The realm of emotion mimicking real life. Starting and ending the day with optimism. That's what it's all about.
Awesome!
Wonderful words here Michelle. It doesn't take much for us to get distracted from what's already here in our own world that we can appreciate.
BUT it also doesn't take much to see IT either, you just have to look!
Thanks for sharing.
Jim
I like that hint of a breeze at the end, so filled with hope.
I like the 'hidden meaning near' line. so often it is those lessons we need to find to make sense of our struggles.
you are quite a poetry girl, aren't you :) well done.
Filled with hope. Lovely.
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Oh, thank you all so much.
I love this one because it points towards hope :)
xx
I love the internal struggle of this poem. Trying to see the beauty of the world while experiencing personal pain, and yes, the hope that is revealed at the end finishes it beautifully. Great job!
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