byJodi MilnerYears of rage and passion
Captured with a fevered pen.
Pages of brittle memory
Every desire, annoyance
Every fight, joy, and pain
Now a source of shame.
She hides herself away
Crossing out the best parts
Afraid of her own truth.
Short. Sweet. Purposeful. I like the idea of the pen and crossing out parts, etc. Makes me think of someone looking at themselves and "editing" themselves. Almost sad to think about! Thanks for sharing.
4 comments:
Jodi,
Short. Sweet. Purposeful. I like the idea of the pen and crossing out parts, etc. Makes me think of someone looking at themselves and "editing" themselves. Almost sad to think about! Thanks for sharing.
Jim
Jodi,
A very deep emotion here. Beautifully
written
Oh I love this! It's oozing with emotion
Thank you all. I wasn't sure if Jim would take it and actually missed when he posted it, so I'm a bit late.
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