by
Mike Berger
Looking back---
when did our love turn toxic?
I should have known it wouldn't work out. She was fun and giddy but without any substance. Drawn to her and her coquettish ways, I fell in love with a wisp of smoke.
Those flashing eyes now
drip hate. She doesn't talk
any more; she snarls. She
detests it when I read. She
must be the center of attention.
There are things in this world beyond the mental cubicle where she resides. Blinded by a desire to have her, I couldn't see that the whole world revolved around her. It was I, I, I and never we.
I refuse to fight anymore, so
I'll turn and walk away.
2 comments:
Incredibly powerful poem. Loved the line about falling for a wisp of smoke... seems the perfect imagery. Wonderful.
Yes, the 'best behavior' of early dating and then emerges the 'monster'. All too often, that will happen and leave you empty again.
I also love 'a wisp of smoke'. It speaks to a sense of loss very well.
I dislike selfish people. The I, I, I kind of people.
Awesome poetry, Mike!
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