Monday, May 17, 2010
Dawn Breaks
by
Rebecca Besser
Thoughts of you flood my mind.
Peace and rest, I can not find.
I left the house, to seek relief.
You torment my soul beyond belief.
A happy dawn, my heart seeks.
My mind of your ignorance reeks.
You are callous to other’s pain.
Full of yourself, pompous and vain.
I wish I'd never heard your voice.
If only I could change that single choice.
My life would be better, without you.
Your rudeness infects like the Swine Flu.
You stretch out your hand to a friend.
Only later, their life you will end.
I walk for awhile and find peace.
All thoughts of you, I finally release.
I walk back to the house, finally free.
As a beautiful dawn breaks over the sea.
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2 comments:
the ending is such a beautiful place - free, peaceful and released.
Becca,
The emotion and imagery are great here. I can see someone walking outside right before dawn to clear their mind... I do this at night sometimes... just go for a walk, watch the stars, and let my mind "air out" a little.
Jim
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