Tuesday, February 16, 2010
This
by
Carrie Clevenger
I am
a box of paradox
so hard to be free
gracefully
to be who I am
the lion eats the lamb
and I see
a peaceful eternity
I am not money
but power
in each and every
torturous hour
a simple inoculation
of revelation
into the center
of my gravity
It’s hard to be
mean as me and yet
still have a heart.
I’ll bet you never knew
that I could kill so very
kindly
and that those words
could tear apart your stolid beliefs
A definite electrocution
of pointed and repeated
persecution
A new disposition
on my limited edition
A snide remark played out between
the sheets of music and me
the worst drama queen
I know you’ve never seen
Someone as quite as contradictory
and extraordinary
as me.
an apparition bestowed upon
a grateful mind
A perfect find
to highlight an otherwise
grey-streaked day—
I don’t come any other way.
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8 comments:
Carrie,
This is beyond awesome!
I love the person feel of it and it really speaks to me. It's a masochist's happiness or something here and I LOVE LOVE LOVE it.
Thanks for sharing,
Jim
That perfectly encapsulates the particular ability of southern women to cut others off at the knees with a smile. Awesomeness.
Great tempo and language-to me, it speaks of mother nature, ravenous, contradictory, and no, not mean, but heartless just the same.
Well done.
Oooh! Carrie, very passive aggressive behavior going on here.
"I don't come any other way"
I love it!
I think the last line says it all. Awesome!
Loved it - wonderful poem :)
Carrie, you've been reading my mail. None of us are one-dimensional cardboard cut-outs, thank god, and your poem speaks to me about that with sassy straightforwardness.
OK, seriously? You can stop being this good anytime now...
Contradictory and extraordinary are pretty good things to be :)
Congrats! Another excellent example of your awesome writing skills!
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