tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2677280056552932322.post6879489954887323808..comments2023-05-22T05:21:30.615-07:00Comments on Soft Whispers: Word Association, 3 a.m.Soft Whispershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00157713445558880419noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2677280056552932322.post-33889333965004783772010-03-25T09:28:30.788-07:002010-03-25T09:28:30.788-07:00Thanks, Cynthia. I'm glad you liked it. :)Thanks, Cynthia. I'm glad you liked it. :)Joz Varlohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12750541029227514781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2677280056552932322.post-59902657128952880312010-03-25T08:28:16.874-07:002010-03-25T08:28:16.874-07:00Powerful words and I see powerful pain, Maria. You...Powerful words and I see powerful pain, Maria. You respond well to it. <br />I really enjoyed the pace of your words.. As, Jim said, you slow it down with the larger words. And it seems to soften the thought, as well.<br />Love it!Cynthia Schuerrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03975914802967433794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2677280056552932322.post-11140061106638720512010-03-25T07:27:17.875-07:002010-03-25T07:27:17.875-07:00Thanks, guys for the nice comments. You all nailed...Thanks, guys for the nice comments. You all nailed where my soul was at when I wrote this (and yes, when I finished the rough draft, it was about 3 am) and it sort of is my "Where are you?" question to God because I am suffering and undergoing trials right now. It is difficult and Marisa, you are right. Sometimes it requires us to just shut our eyes and walk right off the ledge. Which is how I responded to getting laid off with this whole college thing.Joz Varlohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12750541029227514781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2677280056552932322.post-14338695277955088202010-03-25T06:20:05.201-07:002010-03-25T06:20:05.201-07:00Lovely.Lovely.Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2677280056552932322.post-76941093109494734842010-03-25T05:52:54.339-07:002010-03-25T05:52:54.339-07:00Powerful.
Those early morning questions about fai...Powerful.<br /><br />Those early morning questions about faith after suffering immeasurable loss. The 'whys' of it all.<br /><br />No answers, yet. No rest for body or soul.<br /><br />Both cases--faith, love--require a leap.<br /><br />Love your beautiful poem.Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2677280056552932322.post-51885585655355719402010-03-25T05:28:30.869-07:002010-03-25T05:28:30.869-07:00Maria,
The struggles between humans and faith goe...Maria,<br /><br />The struggles between humans and faith goes deep forever. I really like this poem. The short lines make it move fast but the longer words slow it down enough to sink in. Blackness, contextually, conceptually, blessedness. . . such powerful damn words! :)<br /><br />Well done and thanks for sharing.<br /><br />JimJim Bronyaurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09580674307591916148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2677280056552932322.post-6572520366087875562010-03-25T05:28:16.188-07:002010-03-25T05:28:16.188-07:00Ah, 3AM. Good subject.Ah, 3AM. Good subject.Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.com