tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2677280056552932322.post2743744011670513892..comments2023-05-22T05:21:30.615-07:00Comments on Soft Whispers: painting the skySoft Whispershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00157713445558880419noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2677280056552932322.post-7617190436697141602010-01-22T08:05:15.485-08:002010-01-22T08:05:15.485-08:00Thank you for giving me my first published piece o...Thank you for giving me my first published piece of work. I am happy that it was so well received. My heart is light and smiling. I love what you are doing with this online magazine.Joz Varlohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12750541029227514781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2677280056552932322.post-66783625952086373272010-01-22T05:48:20.132-08:002010-01-22T05:48:20.132-08:00Thanks Maria for submitting to Soft Whispsers!
Ji...Thanks Maria for submitting to Soft Whispsers!<br /><br />JimJim Bronyaurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09580674307591916148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2677280056552932322.post-25313708555553107312010-01-22T03:18:03.254-08:002010-01-22T03:18:03.254-08:00Ah yes! you've captured so much dispare in thi...Ah yes! you've captured so much dispare in this - I love it :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2677280056552932322.post-51192354271006480992010-01-21T06:54:26.113-08:002010-01-21T06:54:26.113-08:00Oh, wow. This poem so perfectly reminds me of my d...Oh, wow. This poem so perfectly reminds me of my days of being clinically depressed--those bright, sunny days were always so alienating, their beauty and "happiness" setting off my pain even more. I love the idea of dragging the sky down to earth and "splatter"ing it with gray, black, brown. Love the rhythm of this piece and the barely controlled rage in the last lines.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com